This is a very beautiful piece. I love the image created by words. I got a little confused in two of your lines
Line 7: For I know what lies ahead
Line 19: we know not what awaits us
It's a creative piece
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the piece and appreciate your thoughtful feedback. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read it and offer your thoughts.
For your query, I would say this is something like dual or self conflicts around the mesmerized thoughts of the soldier. Anyway, it’s been nice talking to you.
Best Wishes!
Same here, I'm honoured to meet your great mind