Hay noches amigas de partidas
Esconden el reproche
Del destino y sus azares
De mi copa eres vino
Medio mío
Y de otros andares
Sirve la niebla a tu destino
Fulgores de luz y rocío
El alba y sus despertares
Es el sendero que te toca
Venido del cielo
A morir en tu boca
No he de ser piedra ni tropiezo
Acaso frugal brizna
que al viento escapa
Y si el ocaso torna en consuelo
Otro día que en ayer se posa
De todas las dotes de tu pelo
Fuiste medio vino y una rosa.
There are friendly nights of departures
They hide the reproach
Of destiny and its vagaries
From my glass you are wine
Half mine
And from other walks
The mist serves your destiny
Fulgores of light and dew
The dawn and its awakenings
Is the path that touches you
Coming from the sky
To die in your mouth
I shall not be a stone or a stumbling block
Perhaps a frugal wisp
That escapes to the wind
And if the sunset becomes consolation
Of another day that rests on yesterday
Of all the gifts of your hair
You were half a wine and a rose.
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Un poema de delicadas y sensitivas imágenes, y con una agradable rima, aunque no mantiene regularidad. El vino, la copa y la rosa son elocuentes imágenes transmisoras del talante del poema. Saludos, @joalheal.
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I really like the use of pronouns. "From my glass you are wine." It's powerful to be put into the point of view of the subject of the poem like that.
Hi, thanks for your reading and kind comment.
Im glad you like it!
What a wonderful poem this is :)
Hi; Im glad you like it! Thanks for reading and supporting
You are welcome and I wish you a wonderful day :)
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Excellent poem @joalheal, even though I'm not into poetry very much, that seems well written.
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Oh thanks! Who knows maybe finding out poets you end being one
Hahahahahahaha, you should see my poem about chainsaws lol
It would be interesting
hola joalheal felicidades excelente poema me encanto medio vino y una rosa
Hola, Saludos! Un placer escribir para ti y todos quienes amablemente leen
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