Unwrap your shields
Take down your torpedoes
proceed for greater yields
just don't enter the shadows
continue for another parsec
8 to be exact
Soon you will be have a kiss in the peck
quick now lets keep all this and extract
I really loved this part, it moves me a lot and the image flows very well with the writing, I like it, thanks for sharing this great piece.
Glad you like it man, I'm trying to weave images with words. Sometimes I succeed and sometimes it feels like the pictures just don't materialise.