I'd say play with it and see what feels best to you... but just as good grammar improves our prose, so too can good rhythm and meter improve poetry. As always it is just opinion and you must own your creative space and works 💗💗💗
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Thank you so much for this. I really appreciate this. God bless your heart always 💖💕💕💜😍😍