Prewired
Countless days passed, under the belt and bridge,
Endless steps walked, across desert and ridge,
Unknowable breaths filled, released into the air,
And all those beats ended, as if never there.
Entwined into a mesh, a poor copy of the past,
Too much of the same held, too different to last.
The creative spirit flamed, to start to accrue,
And burn it all down, and repeat all anew.
Blank slates are etched, with the lines of the pool,
Histories untold, and false truths turned to tool,
The broken minds and bodies, of fathers and mothers,
To carry the fears, and condemn sisters and brothers.
Decisions made, from well flawed mission,
Actions performed, from poor default position,
Accepting the win, and celebrating reception,
Believing the lies, of self-made deception.
A million times and a billion lost to trust,
Weathered and worn, as stones turned to dust,
Forgotten by all, who move toward the stars,
Forever remembered, in the wires that we are.
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It may be that we have lived, we have lost, we have been remembered distinctly but briefly, yes. But we will have left a disturbance, a current, a mark, a difference.
The ripples never end, they just get fainter.
Are you saying we are all just mindless wireframes now? :) I'm kidding. Nice piece of work there!
Well.... if it walks alike a duck.. :D
Healing is a journey, it affects not only us, but also our families. It is important to recognize both the suffering and the progress.
I get the feeling that there is more value to be learned from the suffering than the progress.
Our past lives leave a lasting mark. The traces of hopes, joys, happiness, and mistakes, along with their most aesthetic motifs, are etched into our hearts, and we cannot erase them.
etched into hearts and faces.
Time spent on healing, will never ever be time wasted, that's the order in a time like today ❤️🙏
If we spend all our time healing, is there time for growing?
No...! Healing alone is not enough to grow, growth is a process that involves effort and experience to process thoughts, emotions, actions, where time is an ally and never the solution. I think that those who live to please get frustrated out of obligation.
Living authentically is the most sustainable way over time. It will not come without obstacles but it will offer you more possibilities. Good luck with that.
Oh yes, people love to judge and criticize their loved ones. When I was 20, I also wrote poetry, mostly about love, and it was pretty good. And now, a couple of times a year, when I wake up on a nice morning, I start talking to my wife in poetry. :)
Why did you stop?
I don't have those emotions anymore. It's not passionate love anymore, but love for someone very close to me.
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STOPDear my bro @tarazkp !
Do you currently have any unhappy memories of your parents and siblings?
An East Asian proverb says that when one's life gets worse, unhappy memories of one's parents and siblings come flooding back.
What causes the most pain to humans is memory!
@tarazkp Don't you think you'd be a good father and husband?😮