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RE: Mizu No Oto -Every Image Has Its Haiku- Edition #51

in Bananafish5 years ago

The last line: sails in the wind, suggests the fleeting nature of summer. The brief respite from winter, like catching our collective breaths before we are plunged once again into the darker, colder seasons. At least, that's what the line does for me. Summer always passes so quickly.
Greetings, and health.
AG

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I feel happy that my verses have given you a breath of fresh air.
@agmoore, I hold your precious words in very high regard.
I greet you, with my deep appreciation.

Thank you, very much.
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