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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #57 [English - Español]

in Bananafish4 years ago

Yes, it is also possible. Ok, I am not the best for getting poems' meaning, especially haikus, but this is my try on hers:

Autumm emerges
wearing countryside away,
everything starts.

Hope it helped you!

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Yes thank you that is much better for English, but too many syllables. hm.