I love this story, @ubani1. You don't miss a step. From beginning to end, the narrative is fast paced and flows smoothly. The rationale for the story is clear, the character development is strong and the resolution is satisfying. Your windup, that last two lines are perfect.
Good job.
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ubani1 (62) 3 years ago
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