Thank you @jayna, I tried to illustrate the importance of a strong beginning. We all know that first line can be really hard. This one came naturally (of course, it took some tweaking), but sometimes I write and it's not there. I have to hunt and hunt. I'm sure you do that too.
I appreciate your kind words. It is a very simple story, so it's even more gratifying that you think it meets the mark. Thanks so much.