Hello @newton666,
I would like to see this in the original Spanish (I assume it's Spanish because I see the word viaja in here). It is very hard to follow the story. I imagine this must be largely a translation problem. I know some Spanish. Maybe I could help you to find a better way to translate your story to English. I would like to see if it reads better is Spanish. If it does, we'll see if we can somehow help you to get your stories into English.
Thanks for writing. I think I see the thread of a mythic, heroic tale here, but I cannot sort it out.