the poor pup Lies I dare desolated in distant grounds, already several days walking without course, this one faints for his very sublime depletion, following days it is thought by a few hunters of bears of a tribe, that it was next to the place, two hunters it raises his weapon to finish with this small beast but, they did not have the value to kill her, decided to take her where his tribe was to, so that the big boss was deciding that it was going to be with his destination. After one week of viaja the poor pup survives so distant way, on having come to the village of the hunters, the people of the tribe began to shout for the arrival of the hunters, but disturbed for seeing that they were bringing to an alive bear, the pup is taken to the shop of the big boss of the hunters, this it looks at it and his eagle that sees his all begins to become in a bad mood, but it looks at it in some of his eye and sees that it is not an equal bear it is special, and that has an intention in this life and that excuses to him the life, that flagstone gods of the Mother Nature was guiding it to breed to this mystical bear, the big boss says to him that sometimes his best friend is his enemy and if the gods placed it in his way it is for an intention
After a few years the small pup, already it was a big bear raised by hunters, certainly also a very skilful hunter turned with his friends of the tribe, some of that day the big boss takes it to him to a hill where you speak with the gods, it is accompanied only by the eagle that protects the big boss, after a long trip they come to his destination in a hill, where the whole vale is seen and there is lagoon where they all big rock that covers it have the drawing of his forefathers, the half-caste bear remains astonished to see this place, the big boss lights a bonfire and begins to invoke his forefathers, every time his voice does to itself echo and loses with the wind, the eagle begins to fly about him, more and more loudly until the bonfire turns into a flame azula very big and the eagle gets into her and transforms in another big Indian boss, turns out to be that he was a forefather of this one, that his present is an eagle, asks him on the destination of this bear, the mystical spirit speaks with the bear, the bear speaks to him and one surprises that he can speak to him.
Hello @newton666,
I would like to see this in the original Spanish (I assume it's Spanish because I see the word viaja in here). It is very hard to follow the story. I imagine this must be largely a translation problem. I know some Spanish. Maybe I could help you to find a better way to translate your story to English. I would like to see if it reads better is Spanish. If it does, we'll see if we can somehow help you to get your stories into English.
Thanks for writing. I think I see the thread of a mythic, heroic tale here, but I cannot sort it out.