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RE: Reminiscences of my primary education-The Ink well Creative Nonfiction Prompt #23.

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This is a perfectly constructed story. Putting aside the content, which moves us, the narrative follows an arc that is clear and organized. Your first paragraph delivers a wallop. The theme is consistent throughout, almost like a three-act play.

As for the content: the narrative is persuasive and vivid.

Really good job this time, @rammargarita

(BTW: my daughter was a professional dancer--not ballet but the love of dance was strong within her, always)

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Thank you for your comment to my story. I am glad that your daughter is a professional dancer. That love that you feel for a type of dance or ballet requires studies, I could not do them, because of the economic situation, but it was something that was embedded in the deepest part of my heart and I can only evoke and remember them. Have a happy day with your family