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RE: THE SOUP MAKER

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Hello @ubani1,
I leave the story worried about our curious protagonist. If the soup maker has such powers, can she use them against people? Will our dear protagonist be punished for learning the secret? What will happen on next market day? The mystery is tantalizing.

The scene in the cabin is well drawn, as is the atmosphere in the marketplace. You did a good job in drawing us into the mystery of the soup.

Thank you!