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RE: theinkwell writing prize | The Secret to Outliving Everyone

in The Ink Well4 years ago

Great opening! I like the way information unfolds gradually. She is my last living cousin, daughter to my youngest brother, I was twenty-four when she was born. Well that's a riddle - is it a sign of dementia or a typo cousin/niece? Back to reading.....

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Thank you so much for reading and giving your feedback! And it's a typo :). Not a native speaker, in Dutch we don't have two words for cousin / niece. Will change it right away!