This story tells us about Peter, his frustrated love and his professional success. The point you make in the story is well-taken. The loss of his love caused him to work harder, and therefore in a way benefited him. Despite this success, however, the loss of love is something Peter will always regret.
This brief description of Peter was tantalizing. As readers, we would have liked to know more. You can develop this theme and really get our attention. I would love to read that story.
Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community. Keep writing!
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Hi @cryptofi, please fix your images. You need to stop pulling them from Google. This is against copyright laws and against The Ink Well rules. Here are three excellent sources for images that are license free: Pixabay, Pexels, Unsplash. Thank you.
This story tells us about Peter, his frustrated love and his professional success. The point you make in the story is well-taken. The loss of his love caused him to work harder, and therefore in a way benefited him. Despite this success, however, the loss of love is something Peter will always regret.
This brief description of Peter was tantalizing. As readers, we would have liked to know more. You can develop this theme and really get our attention. I would love to read that story.
Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community. Keep writing!
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Hi @cryptofi, please fix your images. You need to stop pulling them from Google. This is against copyright laws and against The Ink Well rules. Here are three excellent sources for images that are license free: Pixabay, Pexels, Unsplash. Thank you.