First off, I want to say welcome to The Inkwell community!
Your story is a captivating one, and it's a really creative use of the prompt. However, I'm not quite satisfied with the way it ended with a mystery. I'm sure every reader would want to know more about the creature that wrecked the couple's yacht and the fate of Julia and the other passengers.
Still, it's a really good story!
I initially didn't plan on ending it but after completing this part I realized I had to complete it, I'm working on it at the moment once I'm done ill post it
Thanks for your feedback
Yay, now you have me looking forward to it!
:)
@hillarypowers Im having a little problem finishing this story would you mind helping me out
Are you on discord?