@arduilcelebren, your story is grand, but if you read The Ink Well’s guidelines, you’ll see that we don’t accept stories about animal abuse. Your story would be fine, though, except for the fact that I believe that a man who would save a puppy would not kill a helpless drunk. Please offer me feedback.
I just changed the ending now because I won't have time this week. Thank you very much for making me realize the guideliness, I will pay more attention in the next stories. 🤗