You’ve got an interesting series going, @hillarypowers. I think it would be a great idea to let people know that they can read the other episodes. You can do this by editing the title to include the number in the series and adding links to the previous and next issues at the top of the post.
Otherwise, your readers will think these are short stories and feel confused.
Nice job of building suspense.
Oh, that's right. I'll do that henceforth.
Thank you for the insight, Jayna