Welcome @b0s, and thank you for joining us. The Ink Well is a great place for short story writers who want to develop their skills. You will find that the admin team and others will tell you what they liked about your story, and give you ideas about how you can improve. It's a great way to learn and grow.
One thing you might want to do is add periods to the ends of your sentences. :-)
Happy to be here
Sorry, I'm not quite sure what you mean could you please explain a bit further