I enjoyed your story, and the very interesting twist, @blackalbino1. I was worried that Edward was making up a lie so he could keep both relationships, but when he brought Maria as proof, that cleared it up!
I have a suggested edit for you. You used the word "faithful" in this line:
It was about to rain that faithful evening...
The correct word is actual "fateful," as the expression is about fate and destiny, not about religion or faith.
Good luck and keep writing!
Oh yeah, how could I have missed that. Thanks for the correction @jayna and I am happy to the moon and back to receive a comment from you
Ps: I’m a big fan of yours especially because of your #actifit posts 😜