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RE: SHE SANG TO MY SOUL.

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Oh, this really charmed me, @esther-emmanuel. I was wary at the beginning because the narrator seems like he could easily be the predator type. So that created some nice suspense! I absolutely love the outcome - that instead of getting a cheap one-night thrill he found himself really falling for the performer.

Great scene building and descriptions -- all of which made the story compelling, readable and authentic. Nice work!

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@jayna thank you for your support and comments. I am happy with your own perspective of view of the story hehe, you saw the suspense there.

It is having you here 🙂