What a sad story, @farahikram. I wonder why George's wife has no name in this story. She is the one who has to take the burden when he releases himself from responsibility for his family's future. But she is still "George's wife." I guess my belief in the strength of women to carry on under very difficult circumstances is coming through! I would like to see her as her own self.
There is an error you might want to correct in your first line:
"You are the precious asset of my life, and I don't want to loss you ever. I never thought it before, that my life would become peaceful and full of happiness after your arrival in my life."
"Loss" should be "lose."
I did enjoy your story!