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RE: Theinkwell poetry challenge | Aurora

in The Ink Well4 years ago

Lovely, inspired piece, @marcybetancourt. This poem creates a mood, for me, of contemplation and wonder, in the space where light and dark meet.

we are light and shadow in the quietness of the abyss,
there's no wonder in my bones

There are many beautiful lines in the poem, but I loved these in particular.

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 4 years ago  

Thank you for your lovely comment @jayna.

Writing poetry is a big challenge.

I'm doing exercises for better writing.