Theinkwell poetry challenge | Aurora

[marcybetancourt]

AURORA

I feel the lights that describe the change
it's still cold, there's still snow,
I can't see them; I'm blind in the cave
life thaws out
how the arctic thaws
we are light and shadow in the quietness of the abyss,
there's no wonder in my bones
the universe pulls the curtains on the new Auroras
trapped in gloomy spells
irate eclipse movements that enervate the air.

Cool morning in the triangular fjords
endless relaxation to go home
yes, I'm blind and tired
when will the summer night come?
to cover my eyes from other lights
in the avatars of sweet dreams.

_{Source: Photo by Federico Bottos on Unsplash.}

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This is my poetic participation for week 5 of the challenge organized by @theinkwell. To know the conditions of entry you can check the rules in the following link theinkwell poetry challenge | Week 5.

Thanks for reading.

Welcome your comments

Infinite greetings!

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Soy miembro Club12

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Poem @marcybetancourt
© Jun 2020, Marcy Betancourt. All rights reserved

Comments

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[marcybetancourt]

Thanks for the message. I posted and the post didn't show up on my blog. I've already put the link

[okikithegreat]

Not sure i understand it in its entirety but it paints a vivid picture. Well done. Cheers!

[marcybetancourt]

With poetry I can create places, experiences and emotions.
In my poetry there is magic.
Nothing is true but everything can exist.

[okikithegreat]

Wow. Nice. Please keep making magic for us but most especially for you. Cheers

[josemalavem]

Your poem is truly beautiful, describing (imagining) with suggestive images the awakening of man in the face of life. Excellent the voice of the lyric speaker and the expression of his mood. Greetings, @marcybetancourt.

[marcybetancourt]

Thanks @josemalavem. Your words are very important to me.

[jayna]

Lovely, inspired piece, @marcybetancourt. This poem creates a mood, for me, of contemplation and wonder, in the space where light and dark meet.

we are light and shadow in the quietness of the abyss,
there's no wonder in my bones

There are many beautiful lines in the poem, but I loved these in particular.

[marcybetancourt]

Thank you for your lovely comment @jayna.

Writing poetry is a big challenge.

I'm doing exercises for better writing.