Wow, I really like this story, @sunnyag. What a completely unexpected ending. And you built the suspense really well when Johnny called to her in that odd way from across the street. I was terrifeid for her! It was such a relief when he had no intent to harm her.
By the way, just curious, why is the male character in your stories always named Johnny?
Thanks for your observation about the story and especially the name of the characters in my story. I will replace Johnny and Dina with a new set of characters starting my next one :)