Hello @ubani1 What a lovely story. This reminds me of many fairy tales. Your character, the Queen, is portrayed as a wise person. She listened to the words of her mother in a time of need. She has all the qualities befitting a person in charge of a Kingdom. But her greatest quality as you portray her is the love of her people. You have given her a empathetic heart. She is willing to sacrifice herself to save her Kingdom and her people.
I love how your story ends, signifying the belief that all good things happen when one sets out on a mission in the name of righteousness.
Thanks for sharing your story. I enjoyed reading it. Take care.