The tale of the fugitive. There's always a good drama in that. I am contemplating what the second album of Phill should be called (as I have to write it on the last page). You were right that it needs another title and it will probably have something to to with being a fugetive... We'll see what i come up with.
Some corrections.
First line, "But it has not been easy." "Has" should be "had".
Third section "the took his passport" - "they took... "
"or" has been split by a line break in fourth section.
For some reason I envision all this as if it was a page in L'Affaire Tournesol.
Thank you. Corrected.