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Thank you for thinking of our community to publish your writing, @milezofplay!

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This is poetic and lovely writing, @milezofplay. I encourage you to expand on your next story. Tell us the names of the characters. Consider telling the story from the perspective of one of them, and introduce some conflict which must be resolved within the story. You can read about the importance of conflict in our post Introducing Conflict in our catalog of fiction writing tips.

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We ask everyone who posts in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other stories in the community for every story posted. Thank you!

Ogam.
I'm learning from you sire.

Nice story