Thank you @litguru. Honestly, my writing was actually almost as confusing as my idea. I wrote it without starting with a foundation of ideas. Everything works. Some of my writings are actually very absurd, but I really like that, I don't even want to be interfered with by the flow in my head. Yes, Kobayashi is a businessman who was hypnotized by the same person who had helped him, namely the man who he considered a tramp. For Hartono, yes, for now, Kobayashi would be very grateful to him.
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It's a great technique to start with an idea and just go with it. Thank you for the clarification. I suspected he had gotten hypnotized somehow. Great theme.