He said that goodbye would be the hardest thing he had to said to his children.
But when it get dark, he was no more, he could not stood to his words, he stop breathing, his eyes were closed and no matter how you called out to his name, he could not hear you.
Everyone rush inside the room but he was no more. He had passed away.
They were all angry at his immediate dearly departure, he was an honourable man, a man of honour and one who look out for his friends and families and as that.
He was still a young man and could have still contribute more to himself, families and
his neighbors.
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Dealing with death is always difficult, but especially when it is sudden and unexpected.
When I read this line, I wasn't sure who it is referring to:
I inferred that the narrator had a friend who was the son of the many who had passed away. This could be something you mentioned prior to this. What is the boy's name? When you add more details to your stories, it will bring them to life, and help the reader to become more interested and involved.
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Hi, @oscarpower55 you talk about the initial impact on the certainty of death.
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This is so sad and indeed a great man like that supposed to still lived further. Dieing untimely is not the best but who are we to question God. His family just need to take heart of continue with life
Very sad story, I wish God bless his soul and rest him in peace. My sympathy with the family of the deceased.
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