I love your writing. I enjoyed the repetitions: “Joe hated running” and “He hated”. It gave the story this flow.
And, there was so much description that added colour to the story — Mr Jones and his car, the Jack Russell dog, and the crazy mornings.
I really enjoyed reading this piece about this Joe guy.
Thank you so much for your comment.
Yeah, I was experimenting with the repeated phrases to see would it work, or would it be too much for the reader.
Good that it seemed to work this time. 🙂
Yeah, it did. It flowed with the story.