Thank you so much for your comment.
Yeah, I was experimenting with the repeated phrases to see would it work, or would it be too much for the reader.
Good that it seemed to work this time. 🙂
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Thank you so much for your comment.
Yeah, I was experimenting with the repeated phrases to see would it work, or would it be too much for the reader.
Good that it seemed to work this time. 🙂
Yeah, it did. It flowed with the story.