On Sunday morning, Ngatini was very happy. Today was her wedding day with Sumanto. Ngatini's face was radiant with a sweet smile and beautiful makeup. On the aisle, Sumanto was waiting for the bride to arrive. Ngatini's husband-to-be also looked dashing and confident.
Five minutes later, Ngatini arrived. The people there were amazed by Ngatini's beauty that day. Sumanto smiled happily as he saw his bride-to-be arrive. The wedding ceremony took place and went smoothly. The people who attended the wedding were very happy.
At first, the wedding went smoothly. The singers on the stage sang while dancing and the guests enjoyed the food served on the table. There was one guest who suddenly had to pee. When she entered the toilet, she heard a hysterical scream.
Aaaa!!!
Everyone was shocked and confuse. One of the men ran to the toilet to find out what happened, and other curious guests also followed towards the toilet. Don't know what just happened, the woman who was about to pee was found unconscious. The man who had run out of curiosity immediately picked her up and moved her to the bed.
After 15 minutes, the unconscious woman woke up holding her head. "What just happened?" the woman asked.
"After you screamed, we found you unconscious in the toilet. What happened to you then?" a man asked.
The woman was silent for a moment, trying to recall. Then she screamed again while holding her head. She seemed to be deeply traumatized. Someone tried to calm her down while hugging her. "It's okay, don't be afraid, we are here," said a woman there.
The frightened woman continued to cry, then left without saying anything. Everyone thought she had a bad mental illness. Not long after, the wedding party continued until it was over. But everyone was confused and wondered about what happened before.
When night fell, Sumanto took his wife to his room. The newly married couple were looking forward to their first night. "Come on darling, I want to," Sumanto said, teasing his wife.
"You flirt! Can't stand it anymore?" Ngatini replied with a smile.
Sumanto immediately put his arm around Sumarni's waist and kissed her forehead.
"Patience first dear, wait for me in the room for a while, I'll catch up," said Sumarni.
"Alright, don't be long dear" Sumanto replied while winking his left eye.
Sumanto walked to his room and Sumarni also walked towards the toilet, because she wanted to clean her face first with skincare. As she entered the toilet, Sumarni screamed. "Aaaa!!!". Hearing her scream, Sumanto immediately ran to the toilet to save his beloved wife.
What scared the guests into fainting was a long-haired woman with a pale white face standing in front of the toilet with a flat face. She was the spirit that was haunting their restroom. It was quite a shock to anyone who saw her.
"Who are you and what are you doing here?" asked Sumanto.
"Sir, help me," replied the female spirit.
"Help? What can I do for you?"
"I was raped and strangled to death. My body was planted under this toilet. I want a proper burial sir"
"Then how can I help you?"
"Tell this to my family who lives down the road."
Suddenly the woman's spirit just disappeared. Sumanto and Sumarni shuddered in fear, then called the police to investigate. After the toilet tiles were removed, there was a skull and bones that had been there about 10 years ago. It turned out to be true, 10 years ago there was a report of a missing person named Julia, and her family was not far from where Sumanto currently lives. After the bones and skull were properly buried, Julia came into Sumanto's dream, thanking him for being properly buried.
In his dream, Julia told him that before Sumanto occupied this house, a businessman lived here, and he offered Julia a job as a domestic assistant. However, the businessman did something disgraceful to Julia, which led to the businessman planting Julia's body under the toilet tiles and selling the house to the bank. Therefore, Julia's spirit is always in the toilet.
The end.
This article was written in Indonesian and translated by DeepL Translator
I'm glad Sumanto and Sumarni were able to help the troubled spirit get a proper burial. Nice story.
thank you very much sir
Too bad how the consequences of another person's sin could hunt others years after. Good to know that Julia got a proper burial
Thanks for dropping by and reading sir
There'll always be justice for the innocent.
Julia can finally rest in peace and leave the world behind.
Yes, Julia's spirit is no longer haunted. Thank you so much Ms
You're welcome.
Hi @radenkusumo666. Thanks for participating in our weekly fiction contest. The story was overall interesting, but why did the bride's name change from Ngatini to Sumarni?
This is the place where it suddenly changes:
Also, we'd just like to remind you that we ask writers not to publish stories in The Ink Well featuring rape. Thank you.
Oh forgive me. Because I use the name Sumarni too often in my fictional character. So I didn't realize that the female character was Ngatini. And forgive me about the rape. I didn't know that it shouldn't be said. Next post I will be more thorough.
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