Hi dwixer
Sounds like Dan had a hard life. I particularly like your descriptions of the town and building
He walked up into the old dilapidated building, cobwebs filled the space, broken woods and ceilings scattered on the dirty floor. Hanging on the wall was an old and wrinkled picture that captured his parents smiling.
Which add to the sad feeling of this homecoming. Putting across feeling like this through description of environment is a great writing technique.
Enjoyed reading the story mate :)