Ohhh the horror 😉
Glad the story sent a shiver up the spine. I think this story could benefit from a longer re-write in regards to fleshing out the plot. I was very pleased with how I built atmosphere and setting, but was certainly aware of ambiguity in the stories action.
Main thing for a horror flash fiction is to scare or unsettle, I feel like this story got the second one down pat.
😱 Mwa ha ha ha ha 😂
It must be thrilling to achieve that! I may have to try out the genre one of these days.