You write with “heart”. A spectacular chain of events that leads to saving a puppy’s life. You fire emotion, follow it up with investigation that feels so “right” and then give us the ultimate weapon - revenge!
Your details make your story come alive - the coat, the uniform, the fast bike and the gun.
You provide a strong storyline and engage the readers’ attention.
Thank you so much! I know this is not the story you aimed for when you asked for the special times but I really wanted to write something like this for a while 😁