An action fiction that includes a very well narrated chase, @bruno-kema .
An attractive motif, twins have the ability to communicate with each other.
The nexus between the two brothers will keep them safe.
You keep the reading interest throughout. It's a good moment when you can transfer Peter's state of mind, making him fall back on the toy helicopter.
And suddenly, his head went blank. The control slipped through his fingers and crashed to the ground. The helicopter spun dizzily before crashing into the pile of books.
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Thanks for posting on @theinkwell
Thank you very much...
I've always been fascinated by the special connection between twins. And it was the inspiration for this story...
I'm glad i posted it here.😁