Your story shares how a family's destiny can change so quickly, when life circumstances shift. George was a happy and carefree person as long as things were going well, but he could not hold up under the strain when they didn't. And the pain of suicide stays with a family forever.
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Did you know we have some great resources to help our community members develop their writing skills?
Be sure to check out our catalog of fiction writing tips which provides a list of all the helpful articles on fiction writing.
For example:
- The Action, Dialog and Narrative: The Dynamic Trio article provides great tips for developing your stories.
- The Help for the Grammatically Challenged article provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.
These resources can help you continually improve the quality of your stories. Good luck and keep writing!