Hello @inessita
Welcome to Hive and The Inkwell community!
Your story was an interesting and entertaining one, and that was indeed a lovely surprise from your mum:)
As you are new, here are some important notes as you get to know our community:
- Please be sure to read The Ink Well community rules at the top of The Ink Well community home page.
- We are all about quality short stories and engagement.
- We ask everyone who posts in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other writers' work in the community for every story published.
- We keep a watchful eye out for spam and plagiarism, which are not tolerated.
- You can find an overview of our community and what we're about in our manifesto.
- We provide weekly writing prompts to inspire our community of writers.
- You can find many fiction writing resources in our catalogue of fiction writing tips.
For your dual language post, we would recommend that you post the English version as the dominant language since this is predominantly an English-speaking community.
Also, we notice that there was incorrect usage of pronouns His (male) and her(female) and he(male) and she(female), so here are some tips for you. The Ink Well has some great resources in our catalogue of fiction writing tips.
We recommend the article, Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.
Again, welcome!
Muchas gracias por sus consejos, los tomaré en cuenta al escribir mi próxima publicación,