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RE: THE TRIALS AND TEMPTATIONS OF BAYO

in The Ink Well2 years ago

You set up a great conflict. Steal the money and save his wife, or give the money back and possibly lose his wife. That is a great temptation. It is reasonable (or at least believable) that the rich chief would help an honest man.

Good job.

Thank you for sharing this story with us, @kingkenny44 and we thank you very much for being such an active member of the community.