You have some wonderful writing skills, @madamnaomi. In this story, you developed some strong characters, and built the story with action, dialog and suspense. But we are left in the end not having the answer as to why Anthony left her. If not for the baby, then there must be some very compelling reason. We wish we knew what it was!
Be sure to engage with other writers in the community. We ask that each writer read and comment on at least two stories for each one published in The Ink Well. Thank you.
I’ll do so. Thank you for reading, I’m glad you enjoyed it.