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RE: Behind Closed Doors

in The Ink Well2 months ago

This story has a strong arc and good character development. When we first meet Sarah she is acting as a confident professional. Then we get a glimpse of her 'real' life, the way her husband sees her and the way she feels. As we get this view, the character undergoes a kind of growth. She comes to understand more about her husband, herself, and the marriage the two of them share. At the beginning of the story she is not sure enough to give Janet advice, but in the end she is confident.

Great use of dialog, also in this story, @marriot5464. Thank you for sharing it with us.