The tension of the battlefield, the quiet heroism and fatalism, is something you capture well sometimes in you stories, as you do here. You create a scene and atmosphere that place readers in the rice fields with the two soldiers. Well done.
Thank you for sharing this well-crafted story with the Ink Well community. We appreciate your meaningful engagement with other writers.
Thank you for curating my story. It is very valuable. And thanks for catching things that even the author himself often misses @theinkwell.