This is a lovely story you have framed around the bicycle prompt, @nathy33. It reads as though it actually happened. You bring Andres and his problem to life for us. The community coming together and helping friends to leave is touching. The arc of the story is very good. It has a beginning, a central conflict and a resolution.
In the future it would be better if the translation and the original were not broken up. If you could publish the English version and then the Spanish version, that would be easier to read.
Thank you for sharing this story with us, @nathy33