This story gives excellent detail about Nooray and her graduation day. We have insight into her feelings, into the reaction of her parents and into the general jubilation of the moment.
Unfortunately, the story is too brief. We have a suggested minimum of 700 words. This falls very far below that. You have good material here. You could have filled us in with more details about her background. That sounds very interesting. She felt like an outcast because others had more money than she did. There is a lot of potential in that setup.
Thank you for sharing this story with us, @noor500
Thank you so much for your compliments 🫰🏻♥️ next time I will try to write story about 700 words.