Well done, @royaldiadem. You have a good character arc. The development is realistic, mostly (perhaps the part about marrying the child of a billionaire is a bit far fetched, but the rest makes perfect sense). You have both a hunger for something and a yearning. Great! The conflict is at least dual. There is the love conflict, and then the secondary conflict of wanting revenge. Both conflicts are resolved by the end of the story.
Thank you for sharing this with the Inkwell community, and thank you for engaging with other writers. Please keep writing!
Thank you for your support