This piece reads as if it is set in the misty expanses of a troubled and confused mind. A mind taking measure of betrayal and discovering the extent of the power-play spun out to elicit intense emotion - be it love or hate.
But he was wrong. He had never managed to seed in her that lifetime detestation.
The resolution, despite the rebounding fear that the scars of the relationship have etched within the protagonist, is perfect. Not many of us in this life are lucky enough to break the bonds of evil intent, nor do we find someone to lean on that’ll make the journey easier. Your protagonist gets to live. Wonderful!
Beautiful, evocative, vivid writing. A stunning read.