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RE: THAT ROADSIDE (A Short Story - Non-fiction)

in The Ink Welllast year

This is a beautiful and very poignant story, @smc.arike.oba. How heartbroken you must have been to discover your boyfriend that way. We can only hope he realized his mistake and that he was wrong to hurt you and let you walk out of his life!

You have a very nice writing style, and it's wonderful to see you progressing on your journey as a writer. (Don't worry about comments that seem to the contrary. Writers care about writers, and want to help, but it can be easy for seasoned writers to forget their early days and the style issues they undoubtedly had to learn and overcome through years of hard work.)

Thank you for sharing your creative nonfiction story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members!

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I'm happy that I walked out of his life.

Thank you so much for your comment and words of encouragement😊 @theinkwell