What a lovely introduction to the community. You tease us, and then reward us for sitting on the edge of our seats. This is a lovely twist on what could have been a cliche. Very nicely paced.
Any prompt that gets you writing is the correct prompt. As for comments, these are always welcome. Writers love feedback. There is nothing 'old' about a meaningful comment.
Thank you for posting this entertaining story in the Ink Well community.
Pleased to entertain you. :-)
Cooking up a cheeky one, maybe for tomorrow. ha ha!
:)