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RE: ACCEPT OR DIE

in The Ink Well4 years ago

This is an action-packed drama! You used the three elements of prompt #17 (dialogue, narrative and action) very well. Perhaps you would like to link to this story as a comment under the prompt post.

We feel the tension mount by the second as Sam waits for the police. One effective technique you use is to be specific. Sam works in Finland. The company deals in online and offline marketing services.

It's very good to anchor your story in details. These give the reader a sense of reality.

Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community. You are very good at supporting other authors, and I will just remind you to keep up that great community spirit.